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Part nine of the continuing adventures of A Mare's Tail.

In this episode, ponies drive a flying truck and some really bad stuff happens.
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Great story, but i think you overdid it on the transformation description. I play a LOT of violent video games, fallout 3 being one of them (heads exploding into bloody bits), but the part where Rose transformed, that made me almost lose my lunch. you might want to tone it down a bit, because right now, from my perspective, you are either obsessed with detail, or have a very stange mind. No offense intended, just one brony's opinion.